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Wednesday, 27 August 2014
Retelling an event from a text. ( EAGLE SRTIKE )
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Good try Atharv. Can you read your account again and see if you can add more information in about the man and the kid. I would like to know where he ran to and how did the man catch up with him? It sounds like an interesting story. Is it a series?
1 comment:
Good try Atharv. Can you read your account again and see if you can add more information in about the man and the kid. I would like to know where he ran to and how did the man catch up with him? It sounds like an interesting story. Is it a series?
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