Once upon a time there was a gigantic forest. Inside this forest were 2 tribes they were split between a awa(river). On one side there was a tribe named waitakare tribe they had a mean and strong chief his name was also waitakare he had a well managed tribe of fairy people that had bright blue eyes. He also had a prince his name was Ethan.
Across the awa was another tribe with another mean and strong leader her name was chief Dennis Hunua. She also had a tribe of fairy people but they had bright green eyes and they had a princes her name was silver.
One day prince Ethan was hungry so he went to the awa but he forgot his matou(hook) so he dived into the water and got himself some eka(fish),mussel and some other seafood he went to shore and started to have some kai(food) across the awa princes silver was hungry to so she went to the awa and the same thing happend she forgot her hook she Jumped into the water and got the same seafood as prince Ethan she went back to land and started eating her kai.
When he finished eating he looked forward and saw his love princes . Then prince called out to her and he connived her to come to his tribe and she agreed the request When the hanua tribe found out that there princes was missing they decided to fight for the princes so the hanua tribe practiced and practiced until they thought they were ready when the waitakare tribe found out that they were coming they practised and practised learning defences and they thought that they were ready both tribes met at the awa and decided war.
The hanua tribe made the first move but the waitakare defended and it keeped on repeating and repeating and repeating until they made to much noise and the guard of the earths secrets came rom underground and banned them for making such noise and he also brought up mountains to bring peace to the land.
I am learning to write a narative. I found it tricky to first write it in our book then on the computer but I have done it and i am happy.
Across the awa was another tribe with another mean and strong leader her name was chief Dennis Hunua. She also had a tribe of fairy people but they had bright green eyes and they had a princes her name was silver.
One day prince Ethan was hungry so he went to the awa but he forgot his matou(hook) so he dived into the water and got himself some eka(fish),mussel and some other seafood he went to shore and started to have some kai(food) across the awa princes silver was hungry to so she went to the awa and the same thing happend she forgot her hook she Jumped into the water and got the same seafood as prince Ethan she went back to land and started eating her kai.
When he finished eating he looked forward and saw his love princes . Then prince called out to her and he connived her to come to his tribe and she agreed the request When the hanua tribe found out that there princes was missing they decided to fight for the princes so the hanua tribe practiced and practiced until they thought they were ready when the waitakare tribe found out that they were coming they practised and practised learning defences and they thought that they were ready both tribes met at the awa and decided war.
The hanua tribe made the first move but the waitakare defended and it keeped on repeating and repeating and repeating until they made to much noise and the guard of the earths secrets came rom underground and banned them for making such noise and he also brought up mountains to bring peace to the land.
I am learning to write a narative. I found it tricky to first write it in our book then on the computer but I have done it and i am happy.
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